Love the old school London bus
I wish my bus went on a roller coaster on the way home.
Fantastic production values. I wondered if it was streaming TVC footage - anyone know? Copy could be improved though. I expect the writer knows this - and I suspect too many client stakeholders do, too.
Posted by:mistermoog on May 2, 2008 10:49 PM
That was very cool. Everything can be improved but you are being a little harsh having a crack at this.
Posted by:BK on May 6, 2008 10:09 PM
for direct response ads these are pretty amazing. simple, to the point and engaging.
Posted by:noki on May 7, 2008 3:55 AM
It's really fun, and eye-catching. It's a shame all those graphics are in the way though. They would have been less distracting if they were in their own area. (in my opinion)
Posted by:everyonesacritic on May 8, 2008 3:13 AM
Also, the call to action could be more motivating...
Fantastic production values. I wondered if it was streaming TVC footage - anyone know? Copy could be improved though. I expect the writer knows this - and I suspect too many client stakeholders do, too.
Posted by:mistermoog on May 2, 2008 10:49 PM
That was very cool. Everything can be improved but you are being a little harsh having a crack at this.
Posted by:BK on May 6, 2008 10:09 PM
for direct response ads these are pretty amazing. simple, to the point and engaging.
Posted by:noki on May 7, 2008 3:55 AM
It's really fun, and eye-catching. It's a shame all those graphics are in the way though. They would have been less distracting if they were in their own area. (in my opinion)
Posted by:everyonesacritic on May 8, 2008 3:13 AM
Also, the call to action could be more motivating...
Posted by:everyonesacritic on May 8, 2008 3:15 AM
